I made this for my band Crematorium. It is old school death metal
Yet, I have no idea for what I will use it,but I am sure purpose will jump up pretty soon
And I need CRITIQUE on this one! What can I improve?
I am not that good in manips, so I would really appreciate ideas...just be honest and no stupid comments please
And I would prefer FULL view
Stock:
Background, earth, zombies, tombstone, stone coffin by
Archway, skull, texture by
Gargoyle by
Moon in the back by
Graveyard by
Heart by
Smoke by
Blood by
Baby by
Pa prvo sto mi se ne svidja je sto se vidi da je ovo kolaz drugih slika (ne fotomanipulacija, fotomanipualcioja je kada editujes sliku a ne kada pravis kolaz a ti is ovde koristila tonu toga...). Nisi sve elemnte lepo uklopila, previse je tamna, i ima iskreno previse detalja koji su tu... well, ne vidim zasto. Duh ti ne treba. beba koja izlazi iz kovcega je... well, ne treba ne znam, ne privlaci mi paznju toliko, mozes ti i bolje. Pocni samo od kapije pa onda dodaj dalje. I malo vise svetla na slici, jedva se vidi nesto.
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jbga, ja bilo sta sto je kolaz ne gledam kao fotomanipulaciju nego kao kolaz. to svako moze Moja kalibracja je sasvim uredu, nego ljudi sa crt monitorima imaju gandu naviku da stvari drze previse svetlo. Veruj mi, crtez je taman, zbog teksture preko svega. Izgleda kao da su boje isprane pa da je onda neko pojacao kontrast na ispranim bojama.
A ako je ovo mama pored bebe.. ne provaljuje se sorry zaista mislim da mozes bolej da se potrudis sto se toga tice. Kapija je strava kao i pozadina, ali ti detalji u dnu moraju enkako da se srede.
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E i da...reci mi gde se primeti d anije bas najbolje uklopljeno, da to popravim, mozda malo i posvetlim, ali ako si siguran za svoju kalibraciju..posto treba da bude malo tamnije
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Ma ja nisam neka Bogom dana...regularna kao i svako drugi
A to za kalibraciju...uff...moracu pricekati jos nekoga da mi kaze...jer sam ja nedavno kalibrirala svoj i platila dobre pare...*ebacu mu ufff...ako me zajebo
A mama i beba...oh well ...mi "umetnici"..ko ce nam ga znati
U svakom slucaju videcu sta mogu jos...ali reci mi tacno koji detalji (gde tacnoooo)
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pa.. sve treba da se uklopi slika nema onu dubinu vec bas izgleda kao kolaz. Generalni dojam je takav. ne mogu sada da trazim specificne detalje ali eto recimo beba mi je zapala za oko, i duh, takve stvari treba lepse ukomponovati u sliku. Ako slika dobije dojam kolaza, onda ti mozak tera da to gledas dvodimenzionalno, jer znas da ej iz vise isecenih delova. Ako ubijes taj efekat kolaza, odmah se dobija i dubina slike, koja ti fali.
Naravno, sve ovo je samo moje misljenje, koje i sama vrlo dobro znas da nije validno jer nisam nikakav certified artist, tako da ne moras da ga uvazis uopste. Koliko vidim po dA ja sma jedini koji kolaze ne smatra manipulacijama i ne voli ih
P.S. Promenio sma dizjan majce, baci pogled i reci misljenje, pliz.
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Ma tebi....naravno da cneim tovje misljenje...to za kolaz se slazem sto si rekao..ti si jedini koji to tako gleda
A mislim da je moja najveca greska sto pojma nemam o senama...pa zbog toga gubim 3D efekat
Ali to znam, ali i znam da sam nula sa tim...pa se ni ne trudim
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pod kalibracijom mislim na brightness i contrast. to podesi. Sto se detalja tice idemo ovako:
beba i majka nisu istog kvaliteta, vidi se da su dve razlicite slike. I niko ne bi povezao da su to dete majka vec da su neko dovje random osoba (igrom slucaja jedno je dete). Napravi neku konekciju izmedju njih ili uzmi sliku majke i deteta zajendo. Zatim, nemaju senke, nikakve. Moras da utvrdis izvore svetlosti na kapiji, kakve su senke na kapiji, i da takve senke budu i od ostalih delova. Isto vazi i za nadgrobne spomenike. Duh... jednostavno strci, ne lici toliko kao duh koliko da je lsika preko slike, tu ne znam sta treba da radis.
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Zatim, duh, beba i mama trebaju jer je nasa prva pesma o tome
A to za kolaz...brate nemam ja bas toliko zivaca kao ti za onaj novcic
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A ako je ovo mama pored bebe.. ne provaljuje se
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A to za kalibraciju...uff...moracu pricekati jos nekoga da mi kaze...jer sam ja nedavno kalibrirala svoj i platila dobre pare...*ebacu mu ufff...ako me zajebo
A mama i beba...oh well ...mi "umetnici"..ko ce nam ga znati
U svakom slucaju videcu sta mogu jos...ali reci mi tacno koji detalji
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Naravno, sve ovo je samo moje misljenje, koje i sama vrlo dobro znas da nije validno jer nisam nikakav certified artist, tako da ne moras da ga uvazis uopste. Koliko vidim po dA ja sma jedini koji kolaze ne smatra manipulacijama i ne voli ih
P.S. Promenio sma dizjan majce, baci pogled i reci misljenje, pliz.
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A mislim da je moja najveca greska sto pojma nemam o senama...pa zbog toga gubim 3D efekat
Ali to znam, ali i znam da sam nula sa tim...pa se ni ne trudim
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really great job
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beba i majka nisu istog kvaliteta, vidi se da su dve razlicite slike. I niko ne bi povezao da su to dete majka vec da su neko dovje random osoba (igrom slucaja jedno je dete). Napravi neku konekciju izmedju njih ili uzmi sliku majke i deteta zajendo. Zatim, nemaju senke, nikakve. Moras da utvrdis izvore svetlosti na kapiji, kakve su senke na kapiji, i da takve senke budu i od ostalih delova. Isto vazi i za nadgrobne spomenike. Duh... jednostavno strci, ne lici toliko kao duh koliko da je lsika preko slike, tu ne znam sta treba da radis.
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